Midnight Dreams

by Skye   Apr 23, 2007


Midnight dreams
choking screams
if only she was what she seemed.
A broken heart,
a soul too torn apart,
the tears they brought,
the life she fought.
If you could see
what you made her to be
would you still be willing to leave?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    It sounds really amazing, however i just hate the fact that it's so short.

    maybe this could be like, a start for you , and you can continue from here.

    overall, good job 5/5