This is soooooo sweet...
oh my...
i'm almost crying
*trying to control herself*
really, it is such a sweet poem...
easy to relate to, also...
5/5 for sure
keep going
*isabel*

Sweet, and endearing. Really this was good I like the way some words rhymed, and the emtion was heartfelt. 5/5

Very heart felt and nice the girl would be proud to be the highlight of this piece

Good try to uses of rymingh scheme in your this words. almost you have successfull in this. it was nicely panned take care 5/5

Lovely dreams I see
That we will be free
Some day we will be...
Just you and me...

^^Wow Mohamed.these lines contain so much of hope...loved it!
This one is so touching..simple yet powerful filled iwth faith and love
=)
5/5
Great job!
xxPoojaxx

True words of love n honest feelings dipicted in this piece. nice work

This was a goodd poem, the flow was very well done the stanza was good. The images you described and the love you felt was very nice all around a good job Plot121

I felt jealous now..lol
But anyway besides that I should admit it was so sweet and touching
I especially liked;

Lovely dreams I see
That we will be free
Some day we will be...
Just you and me...

Take care my darling
Love you
Laura

Ps:Check your pms

This is very beautiful piece, I truly enjoyed it.
It's really simple but touching.
Well done
5/5

It was so sweet and heart felt, i loved it so much, it was so nice. the rhyming was excellent, the structure was great and over all, it was nicely penned, 5/5 your such a talented writer.

Beautiful poem. still some interruptions but again another great poem....keep it up

This was a beautiful poem! you ould feel the poe mthe whole time! i loved it 5/5

What a sweet poem.
Great rhyming and emotions.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Aw, this was so beautiful. Wonderful rhymes and flow. I really enjoyed reading this, it was very heartfelt and touching. 5/5

marcella

I loved the ending stanza it was so sweet and heartfelt.I wasn't crazy about the opening of it but the rest of it totally made up for it.It was very strong and emotional.Keep up the great work.I give you a 5/5 for sure.^-^

<3Amber

Hey this is one gr8 poem....i did like the lst stnanza the best aswell:D...keep up the gr8 writes
tk care
bree

Wow, I should write this down and give it to one of my gfs. Great poem, Very romantic and the ending was superb. Keep it up.

Aww this is such a heartfelt poem...a great emotion piece of writing.. i really enjoyed it.

the flow and rhyming were flawless... looks like you get another 5/5 from me..well done.

Your love poem are fantastic great job
5

This is very simple but really well written. I love the story and the emotion. It's 5/5 from me!!!