Our Love

by AngelGurl   Apr 23, 2007


Our love is pure and true
its a special bond
between us two
its something no-one can take
something beautiful
and definately not fake
head over heels
in love
is the way i feel
its ours to keep
no-one can steal it
cos we're in too deep

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  • 17 years ago

    by dawn green

    Hi!
    i usually don't give advice on other peoples work, if i like it i comment nice work if i don't i just dont comment at all. but on this one i like it alot but the in the ens where you put steal it. i would remove the "it". Other than that I find your work very nice and heart felt!
    keep up the good work and thanks for the comments!
    god bless