My teacher

by Fsams   Apr 23, 2007


A real helping hand
Is my teacher
Who makes me understand
The present and the future

Does the best her duty
Blessed with bliss and beauty
Helps me grow more richer
Being such a lovely teacher

Teaches me to work
Tutors me to talk
Helps me as a clincher
Being a sublime teacher

Blessed with knowledge
A whole-hearted preacher
I pay my homage
For being such a teacher

Foster when I fall
Care me when I call
Words can't do at all
Describe such a teacher

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    A true poem to a special person. I wish If I am a student of ur teacher.
    Great rhymes n the ending was outstanding.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem for some reason didn't really click for me. It was a little slow.. but idk. You did a great job at your flow. Your rhyming seemed a little forced. But your emotion was great. There's nothing really to critize besides your rhyming. Maybe it's just not my type of poem.

    Good Job

    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i never had a teacher like that. but this poem was so very thoughtful i thought it was such a delight to read your poems. the way you word them is just beautiful. and this one was as good as the rest 5/5 again

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awe, very sweet.
    I love the ending stanza.
    Plus, I could really feel your admiration for this teacher; very well written, I must say.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Unwitted

    Foster when I fall
    Care me when I call
    Words can't do at all
    Describe such a teacher

    These lines are simply outstanding.

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