So sadness i felt inside of you..and i hope ypu get this all out..cos it will worry you somehow
For the poem..it was so beatifully penned and really good work
Good job
Laura

I felt your sadness and loss within this poem, the use of double spacings has really helped in the sense of the poem having such a profound impact on me... there is a couple of lines together, i dont know if it was intended, but i think it would be better with them apart... but on the whole really good. i enjoy reading your work!!

That was really sad. the emtions were strng, clear, and raw. The flow was flawless, and the imagery was vivid. I liked this poem too, your pretty good. 5/5