Beautiful ,very heart warming sweet poem.Loved it.

Take care
chavii.

I think you have alot of skill to have set rules to follow and still be able to write a beautiful poem. Im not much for rules. Free verse all the way! :] But i shall be giving this one a go

Take Care aye.

Gem
How beautiful :) Loved your word choices.

Take Care Love Cindy

This is really cute. Actually, I envy you--in a good way hehe--because you always have ideas/thoughts which are adequate enought to be manifested in the form of poetry.
"Twas a candid, sweet write. =]
Love,
Debbie

Great word choice Gem :)
loved it && ive never seen one written like that before lol
~*~Jen~*~

I seemed to get this one better. This is a little better then the other one. 5/5

I've tried this style a few times, but mine sucked lol. This was great though. Perfect to the form with a wonderful flow. Oh yea... I think this makes 15. :] Great poems! 5/5

marcella