5/5 excellent poem. you really capture the pain of it.. and your words are wow. every comparison is flawless. excellent job!

Hey,
wow an amazing poem =) I absolutely love it, the flow is great and i love the second stanza 5/5
kisses stephanie

Really great poem, I am glad to have gotten the pleasure of reading it. Simply and utterly breathtaking. 5/5. -Unattractive1

With all the intense nature images one would expect it to be maintained throughout yet it is not. Still it is an interesting write. The imagery is completely breathtaking and captivating. The words add to that appeal. The third stanza is actually the one that stands out to me.
~Faith-less

Very nicely written, i love the flow in every way. Keep writing 5/5!

Wow, this was a really weird friendship poem. Most of the time, I read mushy dedication poem with people saying how 'awesome' their best friends are. This one, was VERY different, this one is about a backstabbing. I guess, I would have thought this to go under sad, but it makes sense. Good job on this poem. Sucks for the backstabbing though.

Wow.. this poem took a very unexpected turn from gray to dark and gruesome.. i think the poem wouldve been better if your kept it at a gray sad tone rather than changing to all the bloody talk.. its somewhat cliche.. evenso the read was enjoyable and the flow was once again flawless