Comments : What i did so wrong

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Such a sad love poem. Tugs at ones heart.

    Rainy days and stormy nights
    empty streets so full of lights
    all your dreams will come true
    i'll always be here without you

    This stanza is just so beautiful.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Riffy

    This is amazing. You've really managed to portray the thoughts and feelings most of us would experience. It flows very rhymically, beautiful.
    xxx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Tracy,
    We constantly ask ourselves what we did wrong to be done wrong. Most of the time it is us that are too giving and have too much love to give when other treat us badly. We blame ourselves and it's not justified. We tried, but at least we have learned. Keep your chin up and all due things will come to you. You are a wonderful person with so much to offer. Great Write
    Your Friend,
    Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    Sometimes I really don't think the word "Forever" means what the dictionary tells us it does, because everyone that ever said "forever" to me and/or others didn't mean it, maybe "forever" means "until I change my mind"..................they need to change the definition I think..............