by Alex Apr 23, 2007
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Special events /
other poems
I want to be a ballet teacher, and teach the kiddies to dance, to laugh to sing and play all day, and have they're life they're way. |
by Austin
Not one of your best poems...but still nice ;)...i see ballet is your passion :P. try to make it flow a bit more, but still good job ;) |
by Alex
Thankksss. |
by Gem
Excellent, especially as it was written by a dancer =) |
It was pretty good, like you said, not your best. This poem so reminds me of one of myyounger sisters.. She is so into Ballet. Anyhow, nice work here. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by Brittany C
Another great poem. It has a nice flow to it. 5/5 |