Comments : Ballerina!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gothic Girl in Pain

    It's a good poem. But try to make it flow a little bit more. I get the idea, and I understand where your coming from. So just edit it a little bit. And it should be SUPER!!!

    I'm saying this before someone totally says they dislike it. It's good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Another great poem. It has a nice flow to it. 5/5

  • It was pretty good, like you said, not your best. This poem so reminds me of one of myyounger sisters.. She is so into Ballet. Anyhow, nice work here. Keep it up. 5/5
    ~Ally~

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent, especially as it was written by a dancer =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    Thankksss.

  • 17 years ago

    by Austin

    Not one of your best poems...but still nice ;)...i see ballet is your passion :P. try to make it flow a bit more, but still good job ;)