It's a good poem. But try to make it flow a little bit more. I get the idea, and I understand where your coming from. So just edit it a little bit. And it should be SUPER!!! |
by Brittany C
Another great poem. It has a nice flow to it. 5/5 |
It was pretty good, like you said, not your best. This poem so reminds me of one of myyounger sisters.. She is so into Ballet. Anyhow, nice work here. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by Gem
Excellent, especially as it was written by a dancer =) |
by Alex
Thankksss. |
by Austin
Not one of your best poems...but still nice ;)...i see ballet is your passion :P. try to make it flow a bit more, but still good job ;) |