Great writeing here only mistake i think i found was in the first line u have bad and thinking it should have been bed other then that was great i really like the line
"Let that sweet kiss be something we miss
The warm hugs and the smile on your face...be erase"
very nice work keep it up

At first it was lil bit confusing but got more n more clear in the end. Very good poem. And had sad emotions to it... Keep up the good work! :)

Very sad, but other tahn some typos, it was perfect. You did a good job, keep up the good work. 4/5

Great poem, I can some what relate to it. Keep up the great work:) There is one change that you could make. In the fithe sentence of the second stanza I think fixes should be fixed. Only a sajestion. 5/5