THiS iS GREAT. i L0VE iT!

You write very good poems if i could id give you a six :P
Mark

I love it!!so true

Um....i like this. I'm not sure i agree alllll the way but i do like this peice. nice indeed and the fact that u think all sins should be forgiven is very optimistic.....i'm not always good at that. I liked this truely i did, nice write. mayb by reading this some of oyur optimism has rubbed off on me.
<3
L.C

Very true, and relatable. It was powerful, and your wording flowed really well. Nice write again. 5/5