THis is really good and about my poem i had it spaced out and someone said that makes it hard to read thats why i changed it...

I like the style of this one. The title is what drew me in. Good job, and thanks for the comment. :)

I agree with Katie ^^ the title is eye catching. I think. anyway, the poem was good. It flowed well and was unique in a way. I liked how you worded it aswell. Keep it up.