More Than Love (collab)

by debbylyn   Apr 23, 2007


Lost, forgotten, without rhyme
Longing in my heart and mind
Awakened now, emotions saved
More than love, a promise made

As deepest ocean's brilliant hue
Reflect to heaven dreams of you
Spiraling in winds of time
More than love, I know you're mine

Celestial patterns, you in me
In emptiness I cease to be
Within our hearts a love divine
More than love, our souls align

A labyrinth of Earthly ways
Through infinite remaining days
Whispered dreams, a breath between
More than love, our destiny

*collab with Barry

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sasha

    I like this poem it has a nice rhythem to it almost lyrical

  • 17 years ago

    by thegirlyoulovetohate

    Wow is all i have to say. this poem leaves you speechless. i can completely relate to the emotion this poem expresses, thank you for putting it into words. 5/5.
    xxoo darling
    -jess

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Ah, wonderful and well written! I love this poem. The flow was flawless. I couldn't really find any mistakes or any grammar errors. Well done! Check out my two latest poems if you don't mind. God bless 5/5
    <3Tay^__^ily

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Celestial patterns, you in me
    In emptiness I cease to be
    Within our hearts a love divine
    More than love, our souls align
    ^^^^
    Beautiful, Beautiful stanza !
    The ink of love flows through each line and leaves a breath taking mark upon the readers heart ....
    Wonderful collab an excellent read

    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Very nice poem!!

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