X Love Games

by Sole   Apr 23, 2007


Lost my concentration with your hand upon my skin
Your loves restrained my heart, made me feel sick within
I'm cheating one more game, know I'll never win
'I want you forever', you state, with foolish grin.

Non-Understanding leaves me shattered in the rain
Wash away the sins but never wash away the pain
Beaten 'til I bleed, the club comes down again
Honesty and loyalty, turning me insane

Blind investigation leaves me broken in the night
You thought I was wrong, when all along, I was right
Been living in this darkness, just waiting for the light
Dark complexion faded, now it's turned a pale white

Unknown situation and I'm running, no, I'm lost
Found a sort of freedom, but I'm playing at a cost
Sitting by a fire trying hard to melt the frost
Failing to heal these wounds, this fatal line I've crossed

Disappearing friendships’ and I've made the worst mistake
My card's been played, my had is dealt, I'm folding far too late
With deceit and trickery, I brought you down to hate
Weaved lies of lust, lost the trust, left my heart to break

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wonderful. Certainly doesn't deserve a
    4.2. What's with that? It should be
    a 5.0. Great flow I didn't see any
    problem with it what so ever.
    God bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy
    ^__^ily

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I understood most of it. I like the emtions, the flow was good, and it is well penned. I think you did a raelly good job. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    I loved it. The flow was excellent and the emotion was deep.

    'Unknown situation and I'm running, no, I'm lost
    Found a sort of freedom, but I'm playing at a cost
    Sitting by a fire trying hard to melt the frost
    Failing to heal these wounds, this fatal line I've crossed'

    Loved it ^^
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    I liked the writing of it, like some I didn't quite understand it, vocab was good, the flow was great.
    Keep up the good work.
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I like the beginning
    Until it reached the second stanza
    It kind of didn't make sense to me.
    Third and fourth are okay, though.
    But still.
    I'll give you a 4/5

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