Where did the inspiration come from this? i like this you grab the readers attention well keep writing!

Omg, thats so sad. I never thought of suicide like that before. Someone actually does it but later on in death has regret about being so irrational. Or not even realizing they've dont it? Sad. 5/5

I believe this poem has a very affective message. The personification of razor blade is a chilling wake up to what this unhealthy practice many times leads to

Wow, I Think this is the best of your poems ive read. I've neer looked at suicide this way before it was interesting how you made it this way. I found this poem to be really sad with strong emotions flowing throughout it. Not much more i can say on this but just that i found it to be amazing. Well done on a nicely penned poem~mel

Wow this was amazing.. Very different from the typical self harm poems on this site... and so true as well I just wish that a lot more people saw it this way.. WONDERFUL JOB! At first I was a little confused but now that I've finished I have to say this was one of my favorite poems that I've read in a long time. Keep up the good work and thanx for requesting this one.. Fantastic

Wow.
When the other voice 'spoke' , I heard it in my head. Lol, that may sound weird.
But, my thoughts sounded deeper and darker, almost.
I loved this poem.
At the beginning I thought it would be cliche, but it wasn't.. At all.
You did a great job, and I absolutely loved it!

Keep it up.
<3
5/5

Wonderful poem.
I like the way you structured this poem.
And the flow was excellent.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Repetition is good, but it's sorta emo, talking about suicide/razors. Very long, doesn't give much incite, and you used a bunch of capitals, just use a exclamation point or something instead.

A dreadfully well written poem, i especially liked the emphasis on certain words at intervals.

your servant:
david

Wow! this is the first poem that i've read about the after math of suicide. i think that more people should read this. it might help someone. 5/5 love.

WOW! This poem actucally cought my attention.. great job not many do that.. The flow was really good. sometimes its kinda hard to get things to flow and you did an awsome job on that.. Loved this.. Keep it up!..

WOW such power in this poem, i really can relate to this. Suicide is such a strong force that pushes you to the edge. Be Safe hope everythings well

Woah...that was amazing. It was scaring me. Sooo well written. Keep it up! Xx Chrissie

This also is another excellent Piece! Suicide and Depression sux. I can relate to this poem very much just look at my name lol course i havnt been suicidal for a year or so. I hope everything is well. You need to talk im here. 5/5 for this poem, keep writing

I find this, wow. That is true, never wish for something, you'll never know when it will come true.

Wow, very well writen poem, i loved it. I loved the flow and how it is all dialouge. gj =]

I don't know if you are writting from personal experiences but i really liked it. personally i've been there and i know how it feels. your poem was GREAT!! it's one of the best and only ones i've read that reminded me what it was like. 5/5

I think that the only way someone could write a poem this amazing about such a touchy subject must have experience in the topic. Yet at the same time you illistrate a knowing of what taking it too far is....awesome poem 5/5

A very, very well written piece. I loved the story, it was very creative. Your rhymes were also brilliant. I do have one piece of negativity though. At certain points, there was less of a flow, and more of a skip. Sorry if I seem harsh or anything, but I think that people should tell the truth on this site...otherwise, what's the point?

Brad

I like it its very good you should keep up wrighting poems i like the dioulge that you used too!