Relee makes you think. Very well written! keep it up!!

I have to wonder were the inspiration for this came from, it is wonderful though. Great write and you incorporated a story into it..great job!

5/5

Wow, this really grabbed my attention, it was amazing~! Really well written, with lots of emotion, the flow was excellent, and I haven't read any poems like this before, about the "aftermath" of suicide, it was a great poem :D Keep up the good work~!

OMG this is simply amazing! great imagery created in this beautiful poem! Nothing is wrong in this poem! well done the flow was flawless! and another 5/5! as always! well done!

It was really nice, and again your description was very precise and it was very well written, keep up the good work, 5/5

What a captivating peice.

You can really feel the desperation in her voice, and the wisdom and a little anger in the other's.
Truly and amazingly unique poem.

Keep it up,
Elaine. 5/5