I like this alot it makes me feel like i want to do things with myl ife im one of those people who dont do anything because they think they cant but give it a go out of curiosity and succeed everyone should be like tis in your poem xx

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Wow I liked this one such a simple message and its so simple that I bet a lot of people miss it.. I myself am guilty of missing it from time to time but its true if you say yes you are more likely to find that amazing adventure that you are missing in life. Very easy to read poem. a definate 5.5