5/5 this is really awesome. you express yourself well and i wish i could be more like you. im usually totally against crying but this has really made me think twice lol. not joke at all this is nice.

Ganstas
^Where you trying to say, gangster? From the poem it looked liked in that stanza it just fit to be gangster. But if you are, please don't say gangsta.....
Other than that. Well done! The flow was a little shaky and some parts seemed a little forced rhymed. Not the best. But not bad. God Bless 4/5<-don't take it offensive
<3Tay^__^ily

I loved this one :D there were only a few problems:

- every other stanza rhymed but the second.

- you have forced rhyme( when you rearrange your sentece structure to fit the rhyming pattern):
- For the lies of the establishment, the people are buying.

- i thought the brackets in the poem drew the mind away from what was actually being said.

other than that, nicely done! 4/5

"Love is important to relieve the world from anger,
But what is love? Where is it from? Where can it be found?
We all find it in different places and interpret it differently,
The body's rain plays a major part in the way that this goes round."
^ My favorite stanza. : D SOOOO true.

I loved this poem, absolutely loved it. :D Keep up the amazing work hunni.
5/5

I think you do a great job in conveying strong emotions. very good job. 5/5

Hey..the poem is beautiful...i just loved it...Great poem alex!!.......I just hv no words..Love it..
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

This was written really well. I think you made some really good points and for the most part I think I agree with it. Nice flow all together it was a great poem.

Pretty good write i must say. to me the first stanza was most captivating. (:

I really like your styleof writing poetry!! This poem has open ended questions that make us think about our lives and society as a whole! The title was very thought provoking in itself!! great write!

Very good, very deep and very powerful. Amazing!

Hugs Darren Xx

U commented on my poem so thought id return the favour. your poems are really good nice 1 :)

I like, like, like, well love possibly, i like the message, the words, how it comes across, technicanally its like not a poem, but it is, i dunno

Wow.This is an amazing, true poem. Wonderfully done. I don't realy have any critism to give XD
Well done.
Kelsea

Thank you and I love your poem. It is a wonderful!!!! ^_^

I like this so much! Your writting is so great! good job <3rae

Wow, i have no words to discribe very very good poem :)

Tumbs up :)

Wow.... i am really glad i read that poem... i thought that was soooo good!!

megan

Its a great poem. the flow is a little off a few times but hey.. im no pro myself.. it has meaning though. the description at the end probably isnt necessary because people should have to stop and think about what they just read.. ya know.. i love it though.
**amanda**

I really liked it. Glad you invited me to read it. It was a very good thing to read. "It is all in the bodies rain".

This is beautiful!!!!!!!!!! i love it... it really made me think, really hard too. the flow is great and the wording is amazing, i loved it.