Let me off with you? haha nicely written!!!!

Wonderful poem. The message was clear to the reader.
It flowed well and the repition was great.
Keep it up

|Sarah|

I liked this poem because the reption, made the flow perfect, and it is so true that the world today is like that. I would think that alot of people would agree with you. Somebody should stop this world and let us all off. At least those of us who think there is something wrong witht the world anyway. Good job 5/5