Peaceful Blue, A Gentle Breeze...

I like the repetition! well done! I love the imagery created in this poem! and again! good choice of words1 well penned! keep writing! :) you're really talented! 5/5!

That was quite a nice and delicate piece. I'm in the mood for nature poems recently.
I liked the repetition of "Peaceful blue
A gentle breeze..." It worked nicely.
I do think the repetition of "places the blanket over me" and "a blanket of..." is repeated a little to much in such a short space at the end of the poem.
Overall, you really did paint some beautiful imagery in this. One part I wasn't sure about though was "A child screams for joy;
As sand enters her eye." I'm sorry but if sand went in my eye I'd be screaming in pain and frustration, not joy!!
A lovely poem though, thanks for sharing.

Oh and to make up for the other comment, if at anytime you want me to comment on a poem of yours, just PM me and I'll be happy to!!

Wonderful write, I liked the repetition. The flow was good as well as the strucuture. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

This was a calming poem :D Fantastic poem! I really liked it!

Very nicely written you did a fantastic job! I really loved this poem!!