I like it!... The flow was nice... quite good! But at the end it feels a little rocky!!! All in all good Job and a great poem!

Much love and the best of wishes!
God Bless!

@!Jessica!@

I like your poem alot.....
you do speak the truth....
good work 5/5

Hunter,
this is so cute!! in a serious way...
i like how all you're rhymes didn't seem forced at all, and it flows really well.
great job on this!

~Sandra

See, everyone loves them just like i do! your poems do NOT suck at all and i would know i mean its me!