Death on a rhyme

by GothChick   Apr 23, 2007


That horrible day,
a young girl went out to play.
Unaware of the man outside her gate,
who wanted to do more than take her on a date.

After awhile, her mother called her inside
Her mother screamed so loud she almost died.
But she was no where to be found
The police came and helped search the ground.

Days passed as hours went by
but no luck was given to any guy.
Until that hour, that horindous hour
She was found in the pond beside the tower.

They found her face down
in her favorite nightgown.
Now her body is in the ground
and her killer is yet to be found.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MSz TWiiZZLeRSz

    Wow that gave me goosebumps that was really well written -Jasmyne

  • 17 years ago

    by The Mr Simon

    Hey there : )

    I like this one alot because it describes the scene, leaves you to ponder what happened, and the aftermath. Very well done!

    I am curious as to where you got the inspiration from though? Somehow I can't see that it was you in the pond...

    p.s. thanks for commenting on my lullaby!