by debbylyn Apr 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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What liquid salve does balm my soul |
by carissalynn
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Very descriptive, nice flow! Truly enjoyable! |
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Wow. You have a beautiful vocabulary, and in this poem you showed it off brilliantly. The first few stanzas were a bit confusing at first, however everything was more clear at the end of the poem. 5/5 |
by Sourav
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This is a wonderful poem! Very interesting! |
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Thats chilling!! the selection of words and the image they potray is really dark and so full of sadness. Your poems are really amazing |
by Domino0792
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I love this poem. You're really talented. Your poetry has real meaning. Well penned, all the best and take care |