I liked it but there was one spelling mistake. "to" the way you used it, should be "too" and the one line that said one this for sure, maybe you meant one thing is for sure?

Anyways, enough of that...I really did enjoy reading this poem Darling, it reminded me of me and my sister and it brought a tear to my eye. Keep it up.

Heartchuu,

This is good
I can relate to such a situation its crazy how things change

THis is really great
its a little like
me and my brother

i thought this was great
the depth of it and its

SINCE

not SENSE

just thought you should know

5/5