Prom Night (a song of lost & found love)

by TaNyabAbEE   Apr 24, 2007


Verse 1:
One week til prom, did I make a mistake?
Staying at home, or go without a date?
The one person I'd go with, he doesn't care anymore.
After we danced, he walked out the door.

Chorus 1:
Why did I do it, I pushed you away.
I was scared, to even look you in the face.
I'm all alone now, and it's all fault.
Your face in my mind, will occupy my thoughts.

Verse 2:
5 days til prom, I'm still all alone.
I liked you so much, why did you go?
We shared a lot of fun, but it came to an end.
It broke my heart in two, when you remained my friend.

Chorus 2:
I don't know why I always pushed you away.
I was so scared you wouldn't like me that way.
I was scared you wouldn't like the real me.
I hid myself away, always so completely.

Verse 3:
2 days til prom & I've thought a lot about that guy.
I know I should ask him, but I'm scared he'll make me cry.
I don't think I could stand it, if he told me no.
The best thing I ever did, was to just let him go.

Chorus 3:
Now I know why I always pushed you away.
I knew you liked me in that way.
But you've always completely had my heart.
I've always ignored my heart, since the very start.

Verse 4:
It's prom night, there's a knock on my door.
There stands the guy I don't think much of anymore.
In his hands he held a flower, he asked for a chance.
I took his hand, and under the starlit sky, we danced.

Chorus 4:
I thought I'd made a mistake that night.
But it turned into the best night of my life.
And when I looked up into his eyes.
I knew that we would be alright.

please let me know how this goes, cuz it's my very first song, and in know it's pretty bad, but if you'd let me know what you think, and any suggestions for changes, would be appreciated. thanks!!:)

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  • 17 years ago

    by just me

    Actually i dont think this needs any changes....and i dont think its bad either.. i like it very much....and it's your first song??? congrats b/c in my opinion it's pretty d@mn good.
    <3
    L.C
    *comment my poems plz*