I Want You

by I Love You   Apr 24, 2007


Sometimes I love you
Other times I hate you
Either way,
I still want to be with you.

I often wonder if you
Ever think about me
Like I think about you
All of the time.

You are the one I want
Forever to be with
To hold in my arms
And never let go.

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This is my first poem, so let me know what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LUIS SO FREASH

    I love diz poem nice writting keep it up :}

  • 17 years ago

    by RiCarDo

    That was very nice and so true sometimes

  • 17 years ago

    by Ken

    Good job with the poem 5/5* n if you dont mind could u read sum of mines n tell me wat chu think

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow! this is a really good poem for being your first! you should totally continue writing...try working some rhyming into your work...it always seems to make a poem better...um...if you need any help on writing or whatever don't hesitate to message me...i love to help. thank you so much for the comment on my poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Good job.. i really like it.. keep writing.. i wrote my frist poem a few weeks ago..

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