by Kristina Apr 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I try to write you a letter, |
by Kaila
Very good |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
This was short simple and to the point, but also very sweet. nicely done. however, check your tenses. it doesnt work well in one point. |
Awww, cute and short. |
by Melpomene
This was a really cute poem, i dont usually like short poems like this but you did do a great job throughout this poem. Well done on a nicely written poem. ~mel |
by Curry
You did a good job writing this. but 3/5 because it didnt flow too well and it kind of repeats the same thing the whole entire poem. but keep up the good work! |