by I Love You
Wow what a great job on this poem you did writing it. 5/5 |
by Kelsea
I dunno-I think its a little short...Sweet though. 4/5 |
by Crystal Gaze
Short and Sweet. I always love this perspective. Well done. |
by Vanessa
Short, sweet and too the point. I think the flow was a little choppy too, but it si still a good read. Keep up the good work. 4/5 |
by Julienne
Yeah it was short and sweet, but thats how i like it, i dont like reading poems that seem to have no end, and thats what i really enjoyed, it was well written and it seemed to fit in together really well, i am not sure as to how to improve it... really the only improvement is time, so yeah i would like to congratulate on an outstanding piece that really got through your message and did it without losing the point of the poem, so thank you for publishing such an esquisite piece! |
Hmm just a little typo in the first line it should be "letter". This poem was a little choppy and jumpy, and in turn made it a little difficult to follow. The first verse was preaty good and showed why you were writing the letter however you seemed to lose emotion as the poem progressed. nice try though. |
by Brittany C
Wow, great poem. I felt that way about someone once. This is a very good poem. 5/5 |
by Teria
"And nothing comes even close" < 'even comes close' would sound better.. It kinda confused me. I reread it a few times and it hit me! Loll. |
Wonderful poem. its so cute. even though it didnt rhym i think the flow went very well. the structure was also good. i think you did a great job. 5/5 keep up the great work. |
by Marc Ortiz
Aww its so sweet! it flowed well! good job! well penned! straight to the point! :) 5/5! |
by HollyNichole
Thats good!! please read comment/ rate my new poem "cant stop" |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, i wish someone writes me something like that, |
by Curry
You did a good job writing this. but 3/5 because it didnt flow too well and it kind of repeats the same thing the whole entire poem. but keep up the good work! |
by Melpomene
This was a really cute poem, i dont usually like short poems like this but you did do a great job throughout this poem. Well done on a nicely written poem. ~mel |
Awww, cute and short. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
This was short simple and to the point, but also very sweet. nicely done. however, check your tenses. it doesnt work well in one point. |
by Kaila
Very good |