Comments : Beauty Within Me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was really beautiful your vocab throughout this poem was simply amazing. This poem made me feel relaxed all the way throughout it. Well done on a nicely written love poem~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    The rain falls gracefully
    as if God has cried.

    i really loved this, a beautiful poem, very emotional, and very nice scenery. Love it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Really sweet poem...beautifully written...
    loved it so very much...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*