I've read a few of yours poems before and first off i want to say that your poems seem to get better and better with every poem you write. I liked this it was dark and mysterious but the thing i found most interesting was the ryhme scheme being aaaa its very diffficult to pull that scheme off and you did it very well. Good job ~mel

Oh this was PERFECTTTTTTTT! extremely, absolutely, exactly PERFECT. coz it made me feel so sad and it means it touch my heart.. very nice feelings to read this kind of poet thanks for sharing

Excellent poem! i have just been enspired. 5/5! keep up the good work! very touching poem

Wow.. very powerful piece. The rhyme was dead on, as well as the flow. I enjoyed it all. Kept me interested the entire time. Great work. Keep it up, =) 5/5 of course.
-Ally

"a trail of tears lead to my soul
a stolen heart was the highest toll
giving my total self all and whole
yet knowing I was never in control "
^ I absolutely loved that stanza, along with the last. The rest of the poem was good, but those two stanzas, boy oh boy. loved them. :D

You did a great job.
keep it up!
5/5

Utterly spechless, this has left me. It was an amazing write. I could feel the emtion pouring out of this before I even got past the first stanza. You are talented. Keep writting, and I will keep reading 5/5

Wow...this poem is very good keep up the good work!