I liked the storyness out there in the poem..flow was fluidy and wording was eliminated
I definetaly liked that
Well done
Laura

I loved this one also.
You really do have talent.

'Engraved is your image, A failure in itself
Grappled by all mankind with no one to help.'

I loved it.

Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

You are very talented with your work, the words you write just seem to flow and paint a picture in my head and emotions in my heart... your flow, structure and message were all really well done and i applaud you!! congrats on an awesome poem....5/5

That was diffrent. I loved it. I love your style so far. the flow again is excellent, and the story thing is always good in my opion. Keep up the good work

Another good poem ... i think you should write out the word six rather than typing the number... (just a little tip) also the rhyme crud and mud i didnt like too much.. besides that definitly my favorite so far... a lot of meaning and carefully thought through