Oh My Gosh.
I loved this, as well.
"lick your lips with hell to pay; I'll be there
dirty little secret dirty little mind; I'll be there "
^ I love those two lines. :] Especially the last one. Lol.

Great Job, once again. :D
5/5

Great! i liked this, i agree with teria

"lick your lips with hell to pay; I'll be there
dirty little secret dirty little mind; I'll be there "

those are the best two lines, great great great,
nessa

Wow that is really good, I could almost imange it as a song. Great job, well pinned, excellent flow. I loved it. 5/5