Never wanting to run, like the blood from your veins.
^^^ What a powerful line!
Nicely written piece about the effects drugs have on all of us... Powerful message!

Very powerful write Greenie, emotional and filled with pain. It's a shame what happens to those with this type of addiction and they never realize what it does to those who love them. Well done!

It's a powerful poem with strong feelings. Very emotionally written... Well written!

This...was beautifully written.
I found it to be very intense, hard hitting and moving.
Imagery used created very vivid pictures, each line better than the last and the word choice was an absolute pleasure to read.

You described emotions superbly. Great topic and very powerful atmosphere. First stanza is my favorite, you wrote this piece excellently.
It truly deserves 5/5