by Seronum Apr 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
You were there for me. |
by she
Great style of writing! |
by Alesia
Nice job. It was intense at points, but I think you could have kept that going. Over all, it was amazing! This one line sticks with me and I really like it, " Every time I bled, was every lie you fed." I just love it! Great work! |
Hey!...beautifully penned..very well written..i liked it!..5/5. |
by Brittany C
Very nice flow all through out. It is also interesting. I liked it:) 5/5 |
Ok now this is a poem! wonderful flow and an easy read... the rhyme was almost a little too much but still none seemed forced so that shows talent ... nice job :D |