I really liked the sadness breathing in this masterpiece..but i have to say it would be better if you make the lines near and into the stanzas
Other than it was so sorrowwful,,i especially liked those

This nonsense was a game.

My mind cannot be tamed

By voices yelling my name

Now left alone in hell

I lay with an empty shell.

Keep it up
Laura

This was wonderful. the flow perfect. I can realte to the emtion. i feel like that alot of the time. good job, and thanks for the comments.

Ok now this is a poem! wonderful flow and an easy read... the rhyme was almost a little too much but still none seemed forced so that shows talent ... nice job :D

Very nice flow all through out. It is also interesting. I liked it:) 5/5

Hey!...beautifully penned..very well written..i liked it!..5/5.
Tk care
xxPoojaxx

Nice job. It was intense at points, but I think you could have kept that going. Over all, it was amazing! This one line sticks with me and I really like it, " Every time I bled, was every lie you fed." I just love it! Great work!

Great style of writing!