by A girl broken until Apr 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I slept in the shadows, |
by Just Jade
Yo loz ... this is the poem in your vd folder isnt it? well i like it, its different but member wat i said bout happy things :) |
by Black night
LOL, you really want people to comment on your work dont you. lol. I thought it was good, some of the rhyms seemed a lil bit forced in places, but short from that it was good. |
CAN SOMEONE PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS |