CAN SOMEONE PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS
I WANNA KNOW IF ITS GOOD
ILL RETURN THE FAVOUR
I SWEAR
SCOUTS HOUNER

LOL, you really want people to comment on your work dont you. lol. I thought it was good, some of the rhyms seemed a lil bit forced in places, but short from that it was good.
oh, and dw, im not commentin coz of the message you left. lol
5/5
-Black night-

Yo loz ... this is the poem in your vd folder isnt it? well i like it, its different but member wat i said bout happy things :)