Wow! I thought that was amazing. Really intense and powerfully written.

She use it for them, but there's no one to impress.

Not sure but 'She use it' perhpas should be 'used'?

Other than that.. I'm really speechless, definately the best poem I've read in a long time!

Take Care - Sole.

I loved it it was so well expressed you capuring the moment and making something beautiul of it congrads :D

xxx alex xxx

I don't like the title but the poem is good. I like the wording and the atmosphere is great.

You certainly know how to put the reader in the moment and picture the poem, i don't usually read dark poems but yours are just great. the way you write them, the wording, the structure, just everything. another great write 5/5