This is how i feel bout that guy...if its meant to be it will be eventually. its a wonderful poem and i hope for the best for you!

I loved it. I love the repitition you used.
A lot of emotion was shown.
Beautiful poem 5/5

|Sarah|

WOW...I LOVE THIS POEM..IT MAKES ME THINK ABOUT SOMEONE BUT I GUESS SOMEITMES YOU JUST GOTTO LET IT GO...THIS POEM IS GREAT KEEP YP ALL THE HARD WORK! +TEARDROP

And what a great way to show it! Emoting the feelings of the heart can be easy and can be hard, you seem to have found the hard way to make it easy. By that, I mean to show the words or thoughts as you wish, and finding those words to show. Keep showing! I like it!

It is great poem very impressive; you have great talent expressing your feelings .
wish you the best of luck and looking forward to read more and more from your poems.
Best Wishes,
Sara

Your love poems are always so beautiful and just make my heart sing.
I loved it.

Wow i felt every single emotion you put into this. Its all ifs and if only's. why can't we just have want we want all the time it would make things so much easier. anyhow i really liked this poem you did an awsome job on it. Just reading this makes me ache for all the love the world offers.. Keep writting you obviously have a talent for it. 5/5

This is one of my favorites out of your poems that i have read.i can kind of relate to it.but one thing,in the last stanza,you completely changed the rhyming pattern to where it didnt rhyme at all after it rhymed and flowed well the whole poem..i just thought that was kind of wierd. but overall,wonderful poem! 5/5

"If only I could" I would tell you how perfect is this poem. I lack in words to describ ehow wonderful your thoughts are. Great 5/5
Read my latest poem plse

With Love
Fsams

Aaaah first of all it was very romanting poem and a very lovely meesage you want to deliver your loves one.

second the words was so good. its just give the experience that how reader read the lines. with the perfect flowing of words. it was just a great work.

and one thing remain to say that i realy love the repition you have used in this poem. aaah your are such a great writer. i will must give you 5/5
take care

This is so amazing. Very well written, and geez...i've fallen that hard for someone, and i wish he knew all that you wrote about. Very well written. You're incredibly talented.
5/5 <3

I know I've got nothing to say that someone hasn't aready told you, but I have to say it anyway- very inspiring and emotional piece. I love that by the end I was so happy the narrator was going to let him know everything. When you can pull me in like that I'm hooked.
Great work as usual!

I love it, very well written hope you write another one keep up the good work c".) 5/5