Can't Hold On

by I Seem to be the Heartless   Apr 24, 2007


I can't hold on
I can't take the pain
I'm hanging from a ledge
Completely engulfed by flames

I'm burning, sizzling
Won't somebody help?
My skin is beginning to blister
Soon it's going to melt

I can't hold on
The pain grows more intense
My fingers are slowly slipping
I grab for your hand - my last defense

But as I reach out
My other hand slips
I keep grabbing
But I've lost my grip

I couldn't hold on
Now here I lie
Burning in flames -
It's such a horrible way to die.

23 April 2007
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This was done for a contest.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Great imagery in this, great vocab and the rhythmn was really good. Makes me feel like I was watching it all. Well done! 5/5