Comments : Too close

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    Sad. It sounds like you must have been hurt by friends before.
    Good job on the poem =]

  • Good poem.
    The flow was excellent and the emotion was shown.
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Macabre

    I like this one, very sweet. subtle, too ^^

    <3 ashley