Very good, it is a good poem, even if you wrote it in history and your bored keep and it, a great poem 5 for you, nessa

Ha...cracked me up, but I know it shouldn't. I like how you didn't go straight to rhymes-sometimes a rhyming poem can be worthless. Good job =]

Line 11: "I'm confuse" should be 'confused'

but this is actually a really good poem so I dont know what you're talking about saying it's not good. I like it a lot. It's a very different type of poem, which made it better. it was great! 5/5
Keep writing!

~Kristina

Hey,
a good poem, the flow was sometimes a little off but overall its a nice poem, i like the subject and it easy to understand =) 5/5
kisses stephanie

It was pretty good, but it was also kinda funny... ha ha... sry.
it flowed, and the descriptions were really beautiful.. so yeah, 5/5!
gabriella

This is a good poem
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Lol, I do write poems in our classes too, especially when it's our english class, especially when the teacher is telling us how to make a simple simple sentence in english.
writing can be a real relief, especially when it's your thoughts coming out of the tip of your pen. a less crowded mind has always been better :)
thanks for your comment on my poetry :)
Marjan

Okay thanks for all the comment guys :)

I really liked this poem. It was a pleasantly sad poem, with a good mixture of excellent imagery and clear poetry. Nice.

Take Care - Sole.

You have many nice thoughts but i think if you took this poem and added more vocabulary and symbolism, maybe structure it differently, it would definetly be better. I personally like it how it is now but take my suggestions if you want it to be better since you think it's bad. 5/5

Hah hah hah!
Wow.
Even though you did not put that much
Effort into this
It was pretty good.
Although it's more like a story
Rather than a poem.
But still.
5/5 :]]

Wonderful poem. you expressed your sadness very well but i think if you use some more vocabulary it would have been way better. i can relate to this so much. keep up the good work 5/5.

You did a great job. :D
I liked it, a lot actually. I think it's easily related to, which makes it more likable.
The feelings weren't in great detail, but the atmosphere was, which I actually liked. I usually don't, eh.

You did a great job, keep it up.
5/5

This was ok. I liked the first three stanzas, the last stanza I have mixed feelings about though.
The line "I want to reside in this solitude" was fantastic, and to me was the strongest line of the poem.
The reason why I'm not sure about the final stanza is because it seems like you're "gibbering" and repeating yourself when you don't need to. I like how you said I hate her, then contradicted yourself my saying I love her really, I just think the way you wrote it was a bit "blaa."
Interesting poem though, I enjoyed it.

Out of the boredom of the classroom something great arose. You did a great job on this, agaiin the imeregry was vivid and clear, the emtions were strong. Beautifully written. You have talent, don't let anyone try to tell u diffrent, not even yourself. 5/5

Not a bad poem. The title madem e feel as though the poem was quite dark and i owndered what it was about. I liked the first stanza of the poem, it makes the reader ask all these questions, why are you on a stormy beach? Why are you avoiding someone? WHo are you avoiding. It really caught the readers attention. In the secound stanza you used alliteration, "dark day". I liked the poem up till tehre. But the next two stanza's... just didnt work for me. I dont know... The last stanza seemed kinda like a joke or soemthing. But you had a good usage on emotion in this poem. Very powerful. I htought you hsould of used a more variety of punctuation though. Keep writing! xx

"I want to reside in this solitude"
Such great choice of words...beautiful work..great imagery and the lines were filled with emotions..great work!
xxPoojaxx