It took me a while to get. but its a good poem, sad and...sad. but i like it ^_*

Hiii i love ur poem its awesome it funny untill the end cause it reminds me of my friend getting drunk but the tears part is sad ....!

Hiii i love ur poem its awesome it funny untill the end cause it reminds me of my friend getting drunk but the tears part is sad ....!

Ah yes this poem is very sad. i loved it tho. it was gripping and very emotinoal. wat a great poem needs to be like.

5/5 David

The end of this poem was quite a nice touch. At the beginning, people would say it was a funny poem, but the ending ties it off and makes you feel sad for the person in your poem. I look forward to reading some of your other poems, and congratulations on the 3rd place! Keep it up!

With all due respect,
Hatori

Good poem. Very sad at the end.. Keep writting!! your very good at it!

Another greatp oem :d

xxx alex xxx

This is quite different from your usual style but you pull it of. You reached out of comfortable ground in your layout of this. I liked it hun

xxx alex xxx

I don't like it. Your other poems are much better. That is just my opinion, but I think that these is 3/5. I don't like atmosphere and wording is poor. I am sure that you can write much better.