Comments : I have given you my heart

  • 17 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    I like this poem too. Though to me it was like something was missing that could have made this poem a lil better. Like in here we are reading what you feel but like as your reading like it brings no pic. with it. Theres a sense but its kinda lil...like idk i just feel as if its missing something...BUT I DO LIKE IT so i give it a 4/5