by aDORKable x3 Apr 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
What hurts the most is losing you, |
Awe Ciao, that was amazing, and I could really relate to that..but you really did a wonderful job on pulling the reader in and explaining the emotion of the poem without overloading it with cliches and metaphores. I loved this, and the end truly did wrap it up perfectly. |
by Bryan
This is an excellent poem ciao, love the song too, perfect flow, flawless, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |