This is an excellent poem ciao, love the song too, perfect flow, flawless, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Awe Ciao, that was amazing, and I could really relate to that..but you really did a wonderful job on pulling the reader in and explaining the emotion of the poem without overloading it with cliches and metaphores. I loved this, and the end truly did wrap it up perfectly.

5.5