U better not doing anything like that Ash! Laura got taken away in 5th period!

Wow...very suicidal...but i love you ^_^

This is sad. I hope you really don't feel like this 5/5
-vino

You are worth everything.

I care and I love you mucho! Ha! That was a spanish word! Love you lots

--Linz

I like this even though its not a poem..i can relate to this.. good work 5/5

I use to write poems like this and i use to think the same thing. but one day i just let all of the hatred and the pain pass me by. i became the better person that i wanted to be. although i still make mistakes and i still have ups and downs my life is a lot better than it was before. i hope your life gets better somehow love.

I like this poem~ you put so much emotion into it which made it great~ Good job
Dont ever stop writing~ You are truly great and you have a talent~

Sounds so depressed... ><
Nicely flow... ^^

I loved the way your poem just flowed along the page. I hope your really not this way because it would be a shaim if you did kill yourself because your really good at making poems!!! GOOD LUCK AND GREAT WORK!!

....i dont realli no wat to say....depressing....

Really touching!

This is a suicide note.. yet youve written it as a poem. I mean looking at it, it looks like just a note. A little letter. A paragraph. But reading it, you have this flow to it... it works really well. Now the subject of this poem is what many commenters would call 'cliche'. But i felt this had a little sense of originality towards it. The meotion in this peice again is clear and powerful. You voice your feelings brillaintly. A peice again what many people can relate to - myself included in this. Just know - suicide is not the answer, even though it may seem like that at times. And this bit;

"but my problem will last a lifetime."

Well all i can say is, if you dont live your entire lifetime then how do you know? At the end of the poeice the flow has a little bump. But i love your discription. The peice owrks well. A suprisingly enjoyable peice for one on this subject - It wasnt like the usual suicidial poems i read. Keep it up. x

Is this your note??!!!!!!!!

Thats deep.

Great job! dont do anything like that. =D even if i dont no u, nobody should do that... so great poem! keep it up!!!!
5/5!!!

~*~Skye~*~

This isn't the end keep on writting and check out my poems

Beyond the terror of living, past the remains of hope. May you at last find peace in your eternal sleep.

Awww sad but good. If you need someone to talk to im here for ya! ^^ promise, promise ^^ 5/5

Its a very emotive .. and intense piece.. but i wudve liked a longer and more descriptive poem.. that wud enhance ur theme better ..i feel.. otherwise an enjoyable read :)