Being coward is no excuse

by isabel   Apr 24, 2007


You make me cry, you're never fair
Your actions bring only despair
Blinded by tears, can't see the light
For me, it's pain, for you, it's fright

I see that no courage lies in you
While you hide, I'm feeling blue
You just forget my scars and blood
Cowardliness is your own sweet flood

Being coward is no excuse to break my heart
But it's enough for me to hide and fall apart
I'm trying to hold on, to hold my breath
Your cowardliness condemned me to death

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  • 17 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Ivereadeditandilikeditverimucht!!!keepon!

  • 17 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Ive just read the coments ill read the poem in a sec or 2...

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    Strong words. I agree with girlie goo, the flow was a little off at the end, but it gave the poem an edge. The last line is powerful and sad, and the mis-aligned flow almost punctuates that power. Nice work.

    Take Care - Sole. x

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This works well until the flow at the end went a bt wonky lol, your poetry is lovely you should continue to write and i shall continue to read xxx alex xxx

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