Very nice indeed! I really liked this poem you rarely see poems with such amazing metaphor/similes anymore I really enjoyed this

Well written

Love the metaphors you used!

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Hey, wow great poem! i liked the descriptive words you used in it, that always gives a poem an extra special touch. rhyming is usually my way of having a good flow but the way you do it is a nice change! congrats on a fine write. i'd love it if you commented/read/rated my poems as well! thanks alot!

Short and very cute.
I really liked how you described
your thoughts very well.
Thunderstorm is a great use of
weather that seems to idolize
everything you feel. Well done
God bless 5/5
<3tay
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"building up in side your heart." (sic) ( = Inside is misspelled in the line.)

"This storm is one your will to go through." - This line had me confused. I'm unsure whether it is grammatically incorrect or not.

Other than that, I think it was quite charming. The fact that you compared his immense love for you to a raging storm is quite fascinating. That is nice. It could be further augmented by adding more descriptions and imagery, but like I've said: it is nice the way it is.
Nice job.

I liked the way you refered to it as a thunderstorm. this is very descriptive, and full of emtion you did an excellent job 5/5

Wow, great explaination of love, i like the flow...........
as always your poems rocks.
another 5/5 from me.

I adore this...
I love the metaphor you used, and the wording was a treat to read, as was the whole poem.
The flow was good throughout, the imagery creates vivid pictures.
You did a wonderful job on this.

"inside your heart." < shouldn't that be my heart? .. I'm not quite sure.

Anyway, I want this love. :D Lol. Badly. And, I think when someone can put into words how they feel, and what it's like .. well, they're just great. And, you did a great job doing so. Keep it up.

Very awesome poem. The words you used to descrbe it, were really cool. Like camo'ing it. lol.. I'm sorry, slightly hyper. lol.. Anyhow.. It was great. I've read alot of your poems, and you're a great writer, keep it up!!!
-Ally

"Your kisses are like soft sprinkle" = your kisses are like a soft sprinkle

Wow I loved this poem.. its so true love is so powerful and electirc that its like lightening and like a storm because no matter how hot and strong it is it can still bring us to tears. nice write definatly my favorite poem.